“BEFORE I NEVER GO & AFTER I COME!” a poem, a.k.a.: “My Back Hurts!” May 9, 2019 (Thursday)

“BEFORE I NEVER GO & AFTER I COME!” a poem, a.k.a.: “My Back Hurts!” May 9, 2019 (Thursday)

O – – – – – !* seeps-through-your-bones, through-US, and-I-feel-so-good!
Isn’t-that-trite? Well, yeah! but no-one-really-could,
Describe-this-sensation-with-words! You-could-say: “IT’S NICE!”
[You-know: I LOVE your face! I love it twice!]

[I’m in love – with-how-you-make-me-feel!]

I want you for-forever, for E-ternity;
Perhaps-because I-think-you-might give-me im-munity,
From being so stupid and terribly drunk!
And FULL OF YOU and – full of “spunk!”

And WHY-am-I-writing-this? BECAUSE: Your love flows,
Through me! and-gets-into-my-hands! and-this-is-what-it-doe-s:**
IT BABBLES! It goes – on & on,
Trying to describe – the drug you’ve got me-yawn!
It’s a drug called LOVE! and-it’s-NATURAL! and-it’s-CLEAN,
And it comes from – The Prettiest Girl I’ve ever seen!

And I wonder which censor will tell me what Community Standard[s] I’ve violated now,
Because: Every KNOWS: I’M-just STU-PID! I-AM- a-silly-cow:
I’m chewing my cud,
About: HOW O’s* WITH YOU,
SEND ME INTO “HAPPY,” a-happy-hue!
A HAPPY VIEW! A HAPPY S – – -*** –
And I-don’t-care-NOW if-I-feel-blue,
I want YOU – E-ternally! and – For-ever!
Thank YOU – for-ANY CHANGE-of-weather (whether!?)

fin <3



– No, the “O” does NOT stand for Oprah, but GOOD GUESS! ๐Ÿ™‚
** – ๐Ÿ™‚ – Deers! female deers!
*** – No, the “S” does NOT stand for Serendipity, but GOOD GUESS! ๐Ÿ™‚


7 thoughts on ““BEFORE I NEVER GO & AFTER I COME!” a poem, a.k.a.: “My Back Hurts!” May 9, 2019 (Thursday)”

    1. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚ Oh my, I’m failing with my black satire stories ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚ Thank you for those very gracious thoughts โคโคโค

    1. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜… Well there we go another version. I failed again with my new found attrubutes of learnt black satire stories ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

      1. A good sense of humor can keep most relationships together, we all need to laugh and cry occasionally, amen

          1. you have to look on the brightside, and being an artist, no day is a waste. thanks for the comments, blessings

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